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玩弄文字 快意人生

野山幽人二十一世纪之茅庐

 
 
 

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【原】遇见桃花  

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【原】遇见桃花 - 阿山 - 玩弄文字 消遣时光               

                           文/野山幽人 

                      

                                  在春天的旷野

                                我遇见一树桃花

                                    鲜艳的火光

                                      把我照得十分黯淡

 

                                不是  唐诗里的

                                    那一树春光

                                 那位叫崔护的诗人

                                     已在岁月里渐渐老去

                                 那位面如桃花的乡村女孩

                                     在都市高楼上 

                                       一曲高歌

                                    立即红遍万水千山

 

                                        孤独的站在

                                      荒郊野地里

                                          你在为谁香艳?

                                          你是谁的红颜?

                                      你的微笑

                                        只是寂寞的灿烂

 

                               春天,是如此辽阔

                                   我真想

                               为一树桃花而哭泣

 

                                     是我自作多情

                                     其实

                                     你生命的灯光

                                        只为自己点亮

                                      与崔护无关

                                      与诗歌无关

                                        走过了夏

                                        走过了秋冬

                                        在春天里

                                  热热烈烈的开一次花

                                  潇潇洒洒的落一次花

                                         生命

                                      就已风情万种

 

         注】我的网友杨柳轻风读了我的《遇见桃花》,顿生灵感,只两三分种,就写出一首诗来,特贴在下面。我们的诗立意不同,我着眼于人的自我价值的实现,而她则着眼于对人的关注与欣赏,但她的诗精炼一些的。       

                                                                    

                                                                       桃花的低语

                                                                             文/杨柳轻风

 

                                                                  春天的旷野

                                                                 我是一树桃花

                                                                     娇艳的容颜

                                                                 将心事照得十分黯淡

 

                                                                     不是唐诗里的

                                                                        那树春光

                                                                      只是一树

                                                                          寂寞的灿烂

 

                                                                      我孤独的站在

                                                                          无人的旷野

                                                                          年年娇艳

                                                                      我是自己的红颜

                                                                         迷人的笑容

                                                                         是寂寞的梦幻

 

                                                                     春天,是如此辽阔

                                                                     我却忍不住哭泣

 

                                                                         前世的浪漫

                                                                         是否还会遇见?

                                                                      四季轮回哦

                                                                         空有缠绵的诗篇

                                                                         总不见梦中的眼眸

                                                                             为我留连……

【原】遇见桃花 - 阿山 - 玩弄文字 消遣时光 

 注:博友梦读了我的诗,也和了一首,自然是另一种风味。现贴在下面。还有臭味相投的想挥毫作诗的吗?咱们来一个桃花诗会吧。

 

                                                        桃花

                                                             文/梦

 

                                                            安静的

                                                            我在开花

                                                            不要诧异我娇媚的容颜

 

                                                            热烈的

                                                            我在开花

                                                            不要偷听我阳光下的私语

 

                                                            不要问我做了谁的红颜

                                                            不要问我为了谁凋零

                                                            我只是春风中一株桃花

                                                            春来   花开    羞涩

                                                            春去    花落    坦然

 

【原】遇见桃花 - 阿山 - 玩弄文字 消遣时光

                                  【注】现在博友陌上纤尘又写出了佳作,请看:

 

                                                           桃的心事

                                                             文/陌上纤尘

 

                                                      为了今天

                                                      我守候了整整一季的轮回

                                                      整整一季又何妨?

                                                      是伊前世的那朵轻,那片柔

                                                      是天边遗落人间的一段霞

                                                      是爱情停留在枝头的一抹香

                                                      那一缕嫣红

                                                      就这样轻易的,换作了我的胭脂色

 

                                                       那瓣桃红

                                                       象极了我生前说过的一句话

                                                       玲珑的身段

                                                       含烟的气息

                                                       一切在三月,多情的三月里

                                                       暗自妖娆!

               

                                        诗友阿松以词相和,使桃花诗会带上了古典的韵味,请品尝吧

                                                   

                                                         《淡黄柳》调赋桃花一曲

                                                                             文/阿松

                                                                    粉红清韵,

                                                                    无与争杏秀。

                                                                    满山香艳盈衣袖。

                                                                    一枝临溪照水,

                                                                    娇俏只为刘郎否?          

 

                                                                   题南庄,

                                                                   公子情悠悠。

                                                                   恋纯阳,

                                                                   误仙修,

                                                                   谁见谁怜谁玉容瘦。

                                                                   几多诗友,

                                                                   几杯淡酒,

                                                                   醉春风竞风流。

                                                        请看丽丽的和诗

                                                                        桃花吟

                                                                               诗/丽丽           

 

                                                                    醉卧高楼吟春风,

                                                                    似又见前世红袖。

                                                                    艳艳一枝苦争春,

                                                                    谁人怜卿玉容瘦?

                                                    
                                                               沧海一啸又写了一首桃花诗,请各位品评

                                                                          

                                                                                  面对一树桃花

                                                                                         诗/沧海一啸

                              

                               在茫茫的雪原上
                         谁提着灯笼   

                         把我们引进春天的疆域
                         你满脸的醉酡涂红了春天的扉页
                         春天的书便图文并茂
                         你的火焰照红了晦暗的眸子
                         你的花瓣题写着爱的传奇
 
                         那个叫崔护的瘦诗人依然
                         在桃花梦中长眠不醒
                         那个叫林黛玉的弱女子
                         一缕芳魂已零落成尘
                         诗人呀,谁似你还在固执地寻觅
                         桃花源缤纷的落英
     
                        桃花,春天的号角
                        大地的彩笔
                        时代的画卷任你纵横
                        抹去千年一脉的泪痕
                        你的精魂绽开美丽的云


                            陌上纤尘又一首 和诗,请看 

 

                                         桃花诗笺

                                                                                 诗/陌上纤尘

 

                                                            三月,时光向前一步

                              我的容颜,便娇艳一分

                              谁把花的种子,遗失在我梦里

                         谁,是我昨夜伏案书写的一页相思?

                         亲爱,今晨的你

                         会在哪一树桃红里,将我拾起?

 

                        玉人吹笛粉妍醉

                        倘若我就是那一朵桃花

                        你是临窗飞来的那只蝶么

                        每年的今天,我绽放或凋落

                        只是你笔下的一行清泪么?

                        你无语,沧海碧连天

 

                        一个春来临,又一个春走失

                        亲爱的,我就是那朵无言的桃花呵

                        不小心坠入红尘

                        听见了爱情疼痛的呼吸

                        我在等,等你在我耳边

                        化成风,开口对我轻轻诉

                        那首无人读懂的诗笺上

                                                           印上了我粉红色的唇彩,你知也不知?

 

 嘿嘿,又来了一位男诗人,前几天我担心这里阴气太重,现在不觉得了。好了,看剑!
 

                                                            桃花运

                                                               诗/江枫火影

                                                       

                                                                三月挤满桃花

                                                                开在半山腰

                                                                一树比一树娇艳

                                                                一朵比一朵傻

 

                                                               天天翘首

                                                               总怨无人怜

                                                               年年春风陌上

                                                               道是有情却无意

                                                               落红伤一地

                                                               谁去数过几瓣

 

                                                               我用桃花煮酒

                                                               把嫩蕊香魂全饮下

                                                               不必来年寂寞成泥沙

                                                               葬花荷锄早已去

                                                               心痛亦无语

 

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